Fiction
I liked it, good beginning, drew me in, and then piqued my curiosity on what was going to happen. The old man taking them out was perfect, and a surprise ending with a punk getting stuck with the check.
Thanks! Glad you dug it.
I liked it, good beginning, drew me in, and then piqued my curiosity on what was going to happen. The old man taking them out was perfect, and a surprise ending with a punk getting stuck with the check.
Thanks! Glad you dug it.