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Tiffany S.'s avatar

Ooo! I really like this.

"The relic of a dead lover, the blood through my teeth, my lips."

and

"My breath smelt of babies..."

So fitting.

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Buck Weiss's avatar

Thanks so much! Once I had "My breath smelt of babies..." I had the vision for the whole thing being about Lucy and it all came together.

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Matthew Guzman's avatar

Awesome!

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